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Gone

I think you're already leaving.
I just don't know when I will start believing
That your gone.
Maybe that's why I am so with-drawn

It's in you're eyes
All the things you hide, all of the lies
I see it now, it's become so clear.
I am without you here.

They say I shouldn't care, because you're there.
They said it for 9 months so why should I care?
Now that you're gone who will hear me now?
This pain I feel is much more than I should allow.

I let you in, that's my mistake.
Now everyday I feel this unavoidable ache.
But I miss you?


You're just gone.

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  • Carved-Angel
    May 31, 2008

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    wow, i cant help but love this poem hun... yet somehow i always connect things like this to me (selfish = much) but even if it isn't i'll never be gone... never forever at least, ill always make a re-entrance and show you some love.

    Your writing has improved tenfold since i first met you though... seriously! before i used to poke small holes in it but now i cant find anything! you're perfection hun. perfection in poetry!!!

    much love. and i miss you too!