My abandoned heart is yearning
to leap in faithful desperation
as lonely whispers begin to beckon
be free,
my love
Author notes
20 words exactly; picture prompt on contest page
A contest entry
- PIF SEMI-QUICKIE 8/20! by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended May 17, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful take on the prompt, I not only see it as pain, but can also see how this can be interrupted to a wonderful meaning, as in releasing ones spirit to be truly free
congrats on the chalice, well deserved
Rob.
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Hi ya Rob
Thanks for the sweetness you share from your heart and for the congrats on the chalice.*Big*
Des
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Such a sad write. I can really sense the girl's pain with this one. I am so glad that you have edited this. Thank you for entering, and best of luck in the contest.
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I am so honoured to have been given this wonderful award on my entry!! Thank you ever so much for you beautiful comments and for hosting such an inspiring contest!
Des
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A sadly aching piece... i have surely felt these emotions before! Beautiful take on the pic!
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This is a good write. But, the contest asks for 20 words. I'll give you until all the spots are filled, please IM once it is completed. Thanks.
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