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rainy day

You seem to enfold me in your arms,
Oh how strange,
As i walk in this darkness,
Your fingers caress my eye lashes,
Almost making me laugh,
But not quite,
Oh this rainy day,
This day of sadness,
This day of smiles and tears,
All throughout this rainy world,
Someone is standing,
feeling your fingers on there lashes too,
I wonder, oh really i do,
I wonder who.

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  • Hekate gold member
    May 18

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    Welcome To AP

    Hello ana--14,

    Hmm..I bet I could guess on who is standing there!
    I love how you ended this piece. I could literally hear your mind asking those questions.

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