Excuse me while I tend to how I feel
Too much I've done
Your mercy's gone
And this pain just seems too real
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I awake in the morning with tears in my eyes
Cus I know we'd have made it if not for the lies
Had truth been told it may have been better
Hel, we might just even still be together
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Well I'm packin up my bags again
And I'm gonna head out east
Where one girl owes me nothin
And another promised a feast
Now I'm not sayin I'm perfect
Not even sayin I'm good
But you know I'd do anything
To be with you if I could
Author notes
As I said, it isn't done yet but go ahead and leave comments. It is all one poem--for now. I might switch it to three poems later. Going to be written, obviously, in three different styles.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awww how sweet, I can tell you really miss whoever this is written for! Best of luck with the whole going east thing...I tried calling you today like twice but no one is answering the phone...anywho I'll catch you later
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nice job hopefully you wont be such an idiot in the future and remember respect your friends..
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this is a good poem and it shows that you still care for old loves..who did u write this about?



