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My Cocoon and Rebirth

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Years ago 1993 I had a fright

I thought I was going to die

The doctor broke the news I had cancer

all I could do was ask God why?

 

My mate was there to hold my hand

and he never did let go

He encouraged me to take the treatment

it will be okay we will just take it slow

 

I rolled up into my cocoon of pity

feeling sick and sad in every way

But I took my treatment as I was told

and lived to count each day

 

I came alive again through remission

and the support of my dear mate

Until the year 1996, the cancer returned

again I felt I had met my fate

 

Depressed and bewildered I gave up

back into the cocoon I rolled

My mate was there once again

Precious, you have to fight, you can't fold

 

With his strength at my side

I watched the pain he went through

Each day holding my hand and helping me

making me happy doing whatever he could do

 

Taking Chemotherapy was really tough

this second time to go around

Life became more valuable to me

a new meaning to living I had found

 

The most important things in life

are your health, your family and friends

Back into remission I went again

my life had meaning now on the mend

 

Again in 1999 I was dianosed once more

the cocoon was becoming a habitual home

It became a natural illness to accept for me

so I began the procedure and felt alone

 

I've been in remission since 1999

seems rebirth this time is working fine

Hopefully I have finally defeated the disease

God will let me know in time

 

 

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    WWildBill...Thanks for the gold, appreciate the win...mary


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    A heartening tale. Good luck in life as well as in the competition.
    Jim


  • BluesMan gold member
    June 11, 2008
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    Doctors no so little about the strenght, determination and trimuph of the human spirit You are a winner Failures are the ones who refuse to get up after they have fallen down I applaud you and your triumphant spirit for not giving up when so many others w


  • GoodKnightPoet
    May 17, 2008

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    Very good poem that tells about the illnes the support you received and the frustration of its returning. Hopefully it's all over.


  • rbruce gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    A very good write about a situation no one wants to be in. An excellent response to the challenge by WWildBill.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Circumstances beyond our control
    motivate us to regain that power,
    to taste the sweetness of each day,
    to marvel at life regained.

    A wondrous story, Mary,
    of your strength of spirit.

    Take care,

    Aesthete



  • arafura gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Thank you for sharing this with us my friend. You are very brave and stronger than most! Good luck in the contest!

    • amysticwriter silver member
      May 16, 2008
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      Appreciate your comment...I was lucky to have a mate at the time, so many fight the battle alone...hugs

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