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That Night

Walk down the stret
hop in your truck
one look at you
and I want to fuck

Memories flutter
in the back of my mind
you found the spot
no one else could find

That night I screamed
and moaned out your name
wet with sweat
pleasure and pain

Face down, bent over
god so good
you went faster and harder
like I wished you would

I grabbed and pulled
hands clenched the sheet
pleasure so intense
I almost couldn't take the heat

Then out of my memory
as you touch my skin
tell me hello
and it's nice to see you again

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  • XInsanity-FairX
    January 13

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    this was wonderfull to read

    well written, hot, nice flow and ryhme
    well done
    thanks for entering and good luck
    xxx
    =]


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    August 7, 2008

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    This is nice, I liked the tone of it and how it ended. But I still wished to see and read more sexual tention, passion, detail. But a good little read, thank you for the entry and good luck.


  • Brian12
    May 17, 2008
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    Awsome, looks like im not Alone on the sexual tip...nice