I look all around me
and it is the most WONDERFUL
place a person could go
no one had to plea
for what the need
and every person
was uniquely
themselves
they know what
everyone felt
Love was everywhere
there was meadows
and frogs...
but they didn't croak
they sang the most beautiful song
about a peaceful place
where no one was hurt
and everyone had hope and they cared...
not just for themselves
for everyone around them....
a perfect place
where no one had to BE perfect
A contest entry
- AGES 14 AND YOUNGER: Peace and Quiet. by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended May 16, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OPPS I FORGOT I WROTE THIS!!!BUT ID+F I DIDN'T i would say it would make a good book.....i'm pinning this to my page!!!~
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O MY G Kelsie this is like your best pome yet!
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very good
Very nice indeed. Heartfelt and filled with magic.
Thanks for entering; good luck.
Brian
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