I love you with all my guts,
I hate you with all my heart,
That is why I wish,
For you to depart,
I want to loose my footing,
And fall into the unknown,
So we can never see each other,
I want to be alone
I want to see no more sunsets,
I want to feel no more wind,
I want to kiss no more kisses,
I want to forget all I have sinned,
I want you to hear my cries,
I want you to feel my pain,
I want you to burry my coffin,
So you can go insane,
I want you to look through,
The misty window that is me,
I want you to know what you’re like,
I want you to see,
I love you with all my guts,
I hate you with all my heart,
And there is a reason it says,
“Till death do us part”
Author notes
Basically...I'm not married lol. it was meant to be about my step dad but i got carried away...to be honest I don't love him at all but thats what i wrote in the poem...and GOD. im not married to him lol...so this was a weird poem.
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Comments
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Hey,
I know how you feel.
I'm not exactly a fan of my Step, either....
lulz.
Good write, though... No matter HOW awkward. ^^
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lol this is funny-some but really gruesome too.. I love the methaphoric point you drove on this... "till death does us part"lol great job!
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i really liked this poem
"I want you to hear my cries,
I want you to feel my pain,
I want you to burry my coffin,
So you can go insane,"
i really loved that part..i dont exactly know why but i just had to keep reading it over and over..it was my fav.
but the whole thing is quite exquisite..you obviously dont like your step dad huh..well im sorry if hes mean.that makes me sadd..meen people need to go away...but your emotion in this was good i love this poem alot!
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loved this poem it was very interesting and i expecially like the begining,
"I love you with all my guts,
I hate you with all my heart,
That is why I wish,
For you to depart,"
it was very nice flowing and caught my attenion right away.
Good poem!!!
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whoa! i really <3 this poem! it's so powerful...
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lol the poem doesn't really imply you're married. From your page I understood it was about him.. but anyways I liked itt lolol
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OOMG woah. how insane... wow. that was so different from anything ive read lately. how refreshing ^_^ really good job here, just hope it isnt..real...well done :]
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