Hey baby boy,
You fill me with joy.
You're smile's brighter than the sun,
You are my number one.
The radiant stars at night,
are nothing compared to you who's so bright.
You, whose my knight in shining armor,
You're my wonderful charmer.
(chorus)
Boy, you're so captivating.
Boy, you're so aggravating.
I got no clue, how to deal with you.
You're my number one.
You're the first person I think of when I wake,
You're always on my mind.
Can't stop thinking about you,
Who knew, it'd be us two?
(Chorus)
You're my number one x3
Author notes
This was a song for my friend to sing to my other friend for her birthday, but I changed it so it's about a boy so that I doesn't sound weird and her name isn't in it anymore. And this was SUPPOSED to be the first song for my band -___-
To Kat:
I changed it a bit
How was it?
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i LUVED it!! it is really funky!!!
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LOL
Hehehehehehehehehehe
hehehehehehehehehehe
hahahahahahahahahaha
HAHAHAHAHA
Do you realize what you just said?!
Did you read my notes
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band? really now... anyway umm i wouldn't put "you're my numer 1" in every verse. it might get annoying. and it IS a tad cliché... be more creative with how you say things. and baby boy coming from you is like way too weird for me. its so not you. idk. anyway. have fun writing more songs. they are so not easy to write... i've failed many times
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I think songs come to me easier than poems
because I can just like I dunno,
Hear them in my head or something XD.
Ok I'll try and change it a bit.
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