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HM - For Mylee - BGMA Stiles
Your precious heart wants to beat
so let it beat on passionately
Life is tough but so are you
I know in my heart you'll make it through
Keep your chin up have faith in God
he's always there by your side
Look away from the face of dismay
look to the sky and inhale a fresh new day
Clear your mind Clear your soul
take good care of yourself
First you must do all of this
before you conquer your daily lists
Once all of your tasks are over
sit back, relax, and have a little fun.
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moonbumps silver member
May 18
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Best advice EVER. Now I know who to come to.
xxx Love Hilly xxx
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SoulWhispher
May 17
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Such a tender prayer, this really was moving, you have such a great way with words, John
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midnightblue1272
May 17
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Nice!
I just love those first 2 lines. "Your precious heart wants to beat, so let it beat on passionately." A lot of innocent positivity in this one. Very well done.
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