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Temptation's Angel

Missing image
Captured by unworthy lines of love
she sits awaiting the day of freedom
Sought out for her beauty and grace
man kind barricades her in this place
When will this angel of light soar
as she so wishes to go back to her lord
Seduction wasn't her idea from the start
yet the passion she held was from afar

Humans want what they can't have
and she is one of those desires
Torn from her family and friends
she waits for the day to end
Only when humans understand angels
will she be able to go on her way

And that day is forever out of reach
by the game she has played....



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Picture Inspired - Lullaby, By FleurDelacour at Deviantart.com

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Comments

  • I love this take on the pic...the angel and her story through your words, her pains..

    Great writing, thank you so much, good luck


    Cindy


  • jcat gold member
    May 16

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    Very well done!!! You dug deep and delivered something right out of the box!!! Excellent and best of luck lovie....


  • Lagrimas
    May 16
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    Applause

    Sorry I forgot to give you your applause...


  • Lagrimas
    May 16
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    Perfection Reached

    Sis this is good... I really really really like this one. I have no advice... just perfect!