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I know that Fridays can be rough, today was just the same
Trains that didn't run on time, to help you play the game,
The interview that went alright, you maybe got a job
I'm sure I'll spare a crust or two when you're down to your last bob.

I know that London's dark and drear without the hint of sun
No sign of any blueness when the interview was done,
The river looking murky and the people in a rush
The station very noisy, just longing for some hush.

Time for some reflection as you're sat upon the train,
It really doesn't matter now, relax, forget the strain,
Key in door, step inside, time to do some work,
Pint of tea, brain in gear, no more to be a jerk!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This was written as a comment on one of Jeff's poems, just for fun, he asked me to post it, so here it is.
Here also is the link to the poem.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4235811

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  • Rudolf
    May 17, 2008

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    I forgot something

    I forgot to send you the real thing so I'll try to do it again So now I can and *Rock* because I'm .. ....Rudolf

  • Rudolf
    May 17, 2008
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    A poem for a friend

    I'm happless on the keyboard, the comment that I sent
    I hadn't even started, and off to you it went...
    how did that happen? I haven't got a clue
    but I still had to share, three clappies for you...
    rudolf


  • annamoy
    May 17, 2008
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    A great response to Jeff's poem. Well done and a good one in its own right.

    Ann


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Actually, this is an excellent piece of work. Often jolly good poems come from the urge to reply to another poet's work, particularly if one is a friend on the same wavelength.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    hehe... your writes are always so fabulously entertaining Sue!! They all tell a story.... sad, happy, cheeky... all brilliant!

    I really enjoyed this!


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Even your random poems are awesome. Teach me oh goddess of poetry.


  • arafura gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Well done... I'm sure there are a lot of people who can relate to tis one!


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 16, 2008
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    Nice work Sue! I admire what you do on this site. GOOD JOB!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 16, 2008
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    LOL---Well Done!!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Thank-you!!!!

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