We still miss you even after a year,
We look and look but you're not here.
You left us on that fateful night,
You eyes used to shine so bright.
Down to the river we cannot go,
There we see your broken body glow.
We cried when you lost your life,
Many of us reached for the knife.
Your baby is being raised at your will,
You were only 17, beautiful still.
One day soon we'll see you,
The skies will cry..then again be blue.
(This is written for one of my good friends who died. RIP Amanda Porter)
How'd I do?
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Im sure she'd be proud she had such a wonderful poem written for her well done.
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I am very sorry for your loss.. This poem is a wonderful tribute to your friend. You've expressed your emotions here very well and your pain and saddness really drip from your wonderful words! Sometimes it's hard to write these things about a love one we've lost but I find that it does help. It did for me anyways and I hope it did for you
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