The colours of nature,
A snail's paradise,
Shimmering red berries,
The wonder of raindrops
Caught on a leaf,
On a blade of grass,
On every single flower.
Exquisite, awesome,
Rain so soft...
so beautiful!
A contest entry
- Raindrops by Fairy Nutty Buddy.
450 points, ended June 8, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me your best! by Forgotten Anomaly.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Anything (PW Allowed) by swimmeroks.
900 points, ended January 6, 108 entries
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Comments
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I love the imagery this creates in the readers mind. Good luck in the contest!
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A bit short and simple for my liking. I for some odd reason to not think the word awsome fit propperly, I was reading this and suddenly heard the voice of a very annoying teenager call out in the back ofmy head 'awsome' ... rain so soft. Just one of those words that kinda popped out. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thanks
Thanks for your comment and for the contest - hope you have fun judging it!
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And, thank you so much for entering!
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A snail's paradise... haha! That snail was so tiny did seem to be enjoying itself.
I do feel while walking around and taking these pictures that it is all so exquisite, awesome, soft and beautiful - great description!
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