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[ Haiku ] Nightscapes


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these stars-


I travel them, near and far
my feet…  never leave the ground






My Haiku Poetry

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modern Haiku

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 19, 2008

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    Oh..I like how you have the fragment first. I really haven't tried that first. You are magic Mallie...
    Kelli


  • tara wilson gold member
    May 17, 2008
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    I love this...very unique thought & imagery


  • Samplette gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Beautiful. I travel them with you my friend. A well written piece. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 16, 2008

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    I TRAVEL THE STARS...MY FEET NEVER LEAVING THE GROUND! WONDERFUL HAIKU!! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST ~sIE