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Sanctuary of Song!

Touching me to my troubled soul
Every sound
Every beat
Every note
Poignant with real emotions

Longing
Love
Loss
Anger
Elation

Pulling me
Calling me
Inviting me

To give in
Let it all go
Turn my back to loneliness
And lose myself in...

The Sanctuary of Song

Author notes

"Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness."
- Maya Angelou

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    I think music is such a powerful thing.. it can stir the emotions in many ways! Whether it be to suffering in silence with sad music, or to lift our spirit by losing ourselves...

    Beautifully done!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Awe... That is just what it is like to...
    This is excellent imagery, made me want to turn on the stereo.

    Well done


    Delila


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    a beautiful interpretation of one of my favorite poets. I think you are a pretty terrific writer. Love, Lane


    • gllarso
      August 27, 2008
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      Thank you very much, to tell you the truth I didn't know Maya was a poet, that was a quote that I received for a contest. I have been curious and will deffinately look Maya up.


  • rhondasail
    August 27, 2008

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    I really love this...I only suggest the exclamation point be left out of the title...maybe added at the endline...but wow...great expression of falling into the music, taking refuge there. Nicely done. Peace, Rhonda

    • gllarso
      August 27, 2008
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      Thank you, then I guess that means that I did well on my assignment...always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.
      -Garrett


  • Musical Renaissance
    May 16, 2008

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    Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness.
    Maya Angelou

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