Every week we smiled at eachother,
And everyday our hands went up in greeting.
I liked you way before you liked me,
But you know, that's just fine.
I never realized how I felt,
Not the way I REALLY felt,
Until over a year after.
You said it first.
I loved you so dearly,
And we weren't supposed to.
Not then, not for a while.
We had to wait a couple years.
We're still waiting,
Or at least I am.
Our love was forbidden.
Why? Because we were too young.
I still love you with all my heart,
And I always will, my dear.
Keep me in your heart,
And soon, our love won't be forbidden.
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Option #1: This is for daniel - I hope you like it!
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Ahh, I remember this poem !
LoveloveLOVE this piece. Thanks for entering, doll. Best of luck to youuu ! ♥
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Wow that was fast.
I hardly posted it when you were like I remember... lol thanks 
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hahaha. Yeah, I know. I saw it and I needed something to do or read or SOMETHING so I'm like "ooh!" haha ♥
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Wow-wow-wowww
Ohkay, so you basically spoke my life story in this poem. Well, not my life story, but more like my love life story, in which every guy I like & vise versa, it's always "forbidden." Whoa, you have a way with words !
"I never realized how I felt,
Not the way I REALLY felt"
Those lines definitely hit me. I rarely know how I feel. haha
"I liked you way before you liked me,
But you know, that's just fine."
I loved those, too, because of the attitude you were portraying. Excellent write. ♥
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