valiant was an investigator with a taste for the drink
hired to catch her playing paddy cake
they called her kid she had cherry red lips
drank shirley temples and sang at the local speak easy
always served the liquor hot with a cool shoulder
lusty with a sultry laugh to shimmy along your skin
she could walk into the room and make every mans head turn
but valiant couldn't be seduced by those smokey eyes
too bad she disappeared after the string of murders
having to track her down was like following a shadow
word at the local pub was that her husband was a shoe in
drawn to the monkey business of acting hired by the boss
but the kid was caught in a cover up of lies
rumor was that there was another murder going down
and she owned a blood red dress
valiant was hired to catch the killer
the paper said the kids boss was dirty
mixed up in some disappearing ink along
with a mysterious will
but who knew he ended up dead along with the others
was it the dame or was it the kids husband
out to get vengeance for a night of paddy cake with the kid
it was up to valiant to find out
Author notes
who framed roger rabbit with a mix
What did you think
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Awesome! If I did not know that this was about Roger Rabbit, it would have kept the images of a black and white detective show playing in my head...lo.
Great job!
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kid was slightly confusing
as I first did not know ifthe connacted her child
they called her kid she had cherry red lips
they called her "kid". She had cherry red lips
lusty with a sultry laugh to shimmy along your skin
very vivid
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i love this
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Love that movie and you did such a marvelous job bringing it back to life in this piece...That damn Jessica...I always wanted a tat of her, that hot little piece of cartoon ass...
...Love ya' sis!!!
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well framed story. follow the money. follow the money.
as for fav lines, i have to say that i like the 'hot liquor . . . cool shoulder' one in particular. i can invision a curvaceous mrs. roger rabbit at the well.
cheers.
-silverscreenfish
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The minute I read the first two lines in the intro, I knew it was based on 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit'. Well done. It sure fits the era and the mood. I love the mix that you invovled here. Wonderfully written. Keep the ink flowing. Love ans hugs...
~Donna~
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hmmm I like this, I like how you expressed it in prose. a night of paddy cake with the kid, good figurative word usage. I can feel the cloak and dagger of it. Keep writing and thanks for sharing it.
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