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inside and outside.......

inside i cry....
inside i dont always know why.....
inside my heart aches....
inside my body quivers and shakes....
and inside i bleed....
because my heart breakes.....
but outside i feel cold...
outside my body feels old....
outside my scars dont appear....
outside i show no fear.....
and outsidei have no one but my own.....
outside i am alone...
when can i show my true side?.....
when wil i feel alive?....
i guess i wont know until i try...
and thats how i feel on from the inside....

all i ask is to be honest......

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  • HollowAngel
    May 21, 2008

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    You are always welcome to be yourself around me its awsome cuz I can do the same and you dont have a problem with it. I feel the same alot o the times when Im alone I understand what its like. Great write

    • Raven Rose
      May 22, 2008
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      yeah i wrote that one awhile ago lol..... i was going through alot at the time....