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My addiction

How can I explain the high I breathe in every moment you're near.
My heart trembles, and my lips feel numb.
Overstimulated under your touch, straining towards your voice,
My blood leaps to life when you're in reach,
Rushing through my veins, feeding me what I need.
I'm addicted to the worst drug there is...
I'm addicted to you, what am I to do?

Heart torn in two, so alone, every second we're apart.
The isolation tears, unable to bear the weight of your absence,
I can only close my eyes, remember how you feel.
The touch of your hand on my skin,
So many joys to revel in, yet the loneliness strives to win.
I should be happy just to have you, and I am,
But I'm selfish, oh so selfish, needing you, wanting you.
To hell with everything and everyone else.
Can't wait another minute, my world needs you in it.

Every night you make me feel so good, passion not withstanding.
You don't even try, but it's there, possessing me.
Only you've been able to push this far.
Only you smile at my foolish ramblings, despite the insignificance,
Kiss me proudly, searing me in the heat of your love.
Can't pull away, couldn't if I tried,
My happiness in your hands, why would I leave?

This addiction is dangerous, at least for me
It's not healthy to want someone so much
But I just can't stop myself, don't think I ever will
This tumultuous situation to hot to put under
Passion's engulfed, and I can't look back....
Can't see anything for the fire we set ablaze.....

Author notes

1. I choose girlfriend. My AP name is desiredpain.

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  • Theory Of The Lost
    June 18, 2008
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    WOW excellent piece of writing first i would like to say i loved this line---I'm addicted to the worst drug there is...
    I'm addicted to you

    Very well written it was long but it kept me reading more and more it was well worded and phrased, and very emotion filled well done and good luck in the contest!!