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Age

The beauty of birth
Joyful pain in a mother's mirth
Choice-free but to be wrung and writhe
For his deeds, however wrong or right

The consummated seed
Born to continue
The purity of God, His breath and bid
the colour of the world, his infant view

The weight on his genes
his purpose,destiny and its means
This time to be, and so I began
The moment she begat

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  • Mide
    May 16
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    Thanks Diana.'Preciate it.
  • Dienush Greeters member
    May 16

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I like the optimistic tone to this piece as well as some nice images, like "the colour of the world" and "The weight on his genes". Keep writing

    ~Diana