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The Maiden

Like drums in the distance,
the soft pounding resounds.
Repetitive and quiet,
comforting like a morning's rain.

Delicate is the touch,
as fingers graze over flesh.
Soft and rhythmic,
the tender embrace of those star struck.

The sweetest of gazes,
that reveals all to those that gaze back.
Heartfelt and trusting,
the world is at peace within them.

The most gentle of winds,
caressing my body and gracing my mind.
Serene and peaceful,
exhaling the beauty of life.

The maiden's song,
shakes the air of those around.
Powerful and beautiful,
lingering in my mind for days to come.

The tender feel of lips,
pressed to a wounded smile.
Restorative and wonderful,
the pain and the worry fades forever.

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  • crazymomma
    May 16, 2008

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    This is so lovely. I really like the line about exhaling the beauty of life and the last verse best, but the whole is wonderful.