Beauty springs forth neath towering hills,
bouquets of daisies and daffodils.
God's creations abundantly grows,
inhale the fragrance of splendor He sows.
Among the pastels and colorful hues,
snowcaps brush up against skies of blue.
Heartstopping vista a breathtaking view,
majestic mountains cast shadows anew.
Far reaching wonder my eyes convey,
nature's painting on a scale with Monet.
Air brushed as breezes gently glide,
whispering echoes cross Great Divide.
Heaven on Earth and Heaven above,
masterpiece painted with strokes of love.
Towering temples of purplish gray,
at foot of granite wildflowers sway.
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Picture Inspirational by Kelli Marie.
3000 points, ended May 29, 20 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Bravo, this poem is well penned with smooth flow. I like the line about Monet. Niaish for sharing your poem. Niaish Ma Eno has left some love here on your page.
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This is very beautiful Sandy
congrats to you on the HM This made me feel very relaxed and calm which I liked...good way to start my morning Niaish Ma eno from all your Children
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On A Scale With Monet,
that I would have to disagree with, LOL. Yet I do understand the point behind the phrasing.
For the one responsible for spring was also the one behind the spirit of Monet himself. Even if Monet may never have acknowledged it to be so.
Your poem does much justice to the picture with which it is paired. As well, your words leave an indelible mark upon the canvas of my mind.
Your rhyming and flow of thoughts was dead spot on, hitting the bullseye at every turn.
Wonderfully Done Ms. Sandy.
As a fellow member,
Niaish Ma Eno has left some love here on your page.
Be Blessed!
Silent Hawk
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Lovely Comment!!!!!
Good morning friend,
Well niaish for this most lovely comment. Your words were a pleasure to read this morning. I am glad you enjoyed. You always bring a smile. Niaish for that. You take care and have a wonderful day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Niaish Maeno from all your family has left some love on your page...
such a very beautiful poem, great job in tha contest.this is such a peaceful poem.
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Niaish Brave Bear
Good Morning, Your comment was very nice and so appreciated. Thank you for stopping by.
Bless You,
Sandy
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A beautiful poem Sandy. Congrats on the HM. I really like the line inhale the fragrance of splendor He sows. Beautifully written. Good luck in this contest.
Katie
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Thank You Katie
Good Morning, Thank you for stopping by and reafding. I appreciate your thoughts on my poetry.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Niaish Maeno from all your family has left some love on your page...
Just beautiful Sandy!! The picture is so majestic and the poem leaves one with a sense of peace. Amazing imagery and emotion throughout. I so enjoyed reading this morning. Thanks for always being here for me and everyone else. I, we love you so much. Theresa
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Niaish Theresa
Good morning my friend. Thank you for this lovely comment. Hugs and smiles for you. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Hi Sandy!
I'm not big on nature poems, but I enjoyed this one. It has a large scope that I find appealing. Your descriptions of the flowers and the mountains are picture perfect. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Hello There
It is always nice when you drop by. I am glad you enjoyed my nature poem. I don't write many about nature but this one I enjoyed because of the lovely picture used for the prompt. Thank you for this nice comment. Hugs and Smiles. Hope you have a wonderful evening. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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What a beautiful poem filled with vivid imagery. It fills the senses and brings a peaceful appreciation of the majestic beauty we often ignore. I am awed by your words, your rhyme and wonderful flow in this wonderful write. Well Done!
Leaving some
love for you my sister. May God continue to bless you and your muse.
Your Niaish Ma eno from all your Children, brother,
Gray Elk
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Wonderful Comment
Hello there, I want to thank you for this wonderful comment. It was so nice to read. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Always nice when you stop by. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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This is truly beautiful, and the border goes perfect with the picture. Awesome. One thing...in the first line, "Beauty spring forth" Would it not be "springs?"
Still, great piece. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli -
The picture is and poem are awsome, the description so precise, only God could gather to leave space on earth for man to humble theirselve to collect scent left on the wind and ground covered with this lovely image. You display the excellent rhyme as usual for the reader to step through without an overly controlled adherence to the poetic craft.
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Wonderful Comment
Good morning my friend. I hope you are having a wonderful Sunday. I do appreciate when you read my poetry. Your comments are so nice to read. You have a great day!!! Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Nature is You
You have a gift of describing the natural beauty of our world in flowing imagery and rhyme... wonderful words and wonderful poem...
Ken
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Nice Comment
Hello Ken, Thank you for the nice comment. And thsnk you again for the Bronze trophy!!!! You take care, Sandy
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Pretty
Very beautiful description of nature. Love that fourth stanza. Fine work, Sandy.
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Great Comment
Hello Jaime, Hope all is well with you. Nice to read your comment. Thank you for stopping by. You take care, Sandy
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Beautifully done! I loved this! A perfect take on the picture and a poem that can stand totally on its own! Great write my friend!
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Hello Rob!!!
Hi, Thank you for reading and leaving this very lovely comment. I alway enjoy reading your thoughts on my poems. So glad you enjoyed this one. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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YOU DO OUT DO YOURSELF.
EXCELLENT IMAGERY
SUCH A PEACEFUL PLACE YOU BROUGHT ME TO.
GOD BLESS...
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for the nice comment. Always nice when you stop by. You take care, Sandy
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