No surprise
(The love feels so far away from me)
Heavy thoughts sift through lies, and through me
(trying not to break but I'm so tired of my deceit)
(Every time I try to get back in touch and on my feet)
(All I ever think about is this)
(All the tiring lies between)
(and how pouring my love in you just takes so much outta me)
Take everything from the inside
And throw it all away
'Cause I swear
For the last time
I won't trust myself with you
Darkness is building in me, steadily
(The pain feels so far, all in me)
Heavy thoughts forcing their way, out of me
(trying not to give, but I'm so tired of all my deceit)
(every time I try to make things right for me)
(all I ever think about is this)
(all the tiring time between and how)
(trying to take this from you just takes so much out of me)
Take everything from the inside
And force it back with yourself
'Cause I swear
For the last time
I won't trust waste myself with you
I won't waste my life with you!
You.....(echoes)
Waste my life with you!
You......(echoes)
I'll....
Take all this pain from the inside
and give it back to you
'Cause I swear
For the last time
I won't waste my soul on you
all these lies from the inside
And give them back to you
'Cause I swear
For the last time
I won't waste my life on you
You....
Author notes
Every once in a while I decide to make a remix, and this current attempt is from a Linkin Park song, "From the Inside."
Just a few months ago I finally pulled myself together to end a torturing relationship that I was bellowed at to end for several months...But something in her kept me so harshly attached to the point where being in what used to bring me so much joy and comfort just hurt me so much more...
If people bother to read this the Shadowed Remix was my attempt to show a forbidden love that was going to be an eventual death for me
A contest entry
- forbidden love by hardwire.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 24 entries
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