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Of Patriotism and Allegiance

(A sonnet to America)

Believe in a government other than great Democracy
Or something other than a Republic?
We have the best solution you will see
All you Nay-sayers are hung by the neck.
Freedom in America is relative
So are religious and morale beliefs.
Keep the population dumb with sedative
The only thing we hail is to the Chief
America, America you bitch!
In you there are no more Ideals fair.
You cheer for Baseball players best pitch
For your poor and weary you have no care.
So adhere to our great Patriot Act.
If not we'll beat you with a baseball bat.

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  • Little-Kiowa
    August 2, 2008
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    Very nice and true...I liked the last line...
    Unfortunately...it's true...lol

    Alanna

  • roflaura
    May 31, 2008
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    America is a Republic, not a Democracy,
    thank you for pointing that out.


  • The Otep
    May 16, 2008
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    Enjoyed so , so much and very true!