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The Color Of Blood

A raining night like to tonight,
With a rainbow sure to show,
With all the pretty colors so bright and pierce
I hate the rainbow but I love it.

Tonight it won’t be so pretty.
As I cut my wrist and let it rain.
The rainbow will surly show in the end
It won’t be of colors of the real rainbow,
but the color of my blood so dull and fierce.

A contest entry

tell me what you think, honestly....*i don't like liars*

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  • darksaver
    May 18, 2008

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    i really like this poem.....but plz dont do anything to hurt yourself....cuz i can't live without you in my life ily kala


    • xXLifelessLindseyxX
      May 18, 2008
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      thx.
      i'm not going to do nething to myself i just wrote this for the contest and it was the first thing that came to mind. I'm not leaving this world until it's my time to go. so i'll stay by ur side until that day and beyond.

      ily2 lindz


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 16, 2008

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    he having the red font made it feel even more real like oh my god lol...

    Really good writing but scared me lol
    well done

    Good luck

    Cindy