fingernails scraping
body contorted
a chalk board
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A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu and Pixiku by Samplette.
1000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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interesting. it sort of almost seems over done with the contortion thing. but nevertheless it is wellwritten. good job and good luck in the contest!
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Short and to the point. Thanks for entering, and best of luck.
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very cool write my friend
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I have to agree with Sam as far as the real life emotion this brings..lol. You did a great job hear. Good luck.
Kelli -
Oh....yuk. I could sure hear thaaaat noise. I hate that! Very well written. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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