she trys in vain to wash
her flesh of lustful sin
alas the holy watter
refuses to touch her skin.
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A contest entry
- PIF-Great pic so give me something so great I'd want to add you to my favs!! by darlintlc.
450 points, ended May 20, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice write ^^
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just great...
I have such a hard time with short poems, but you captured this pic perfectly...
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is an outstanding write and a great take on the prompt that was supplied for you.
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Awesome
I am just in awe in what you shared in this. Good short description about sin. Thanks Bill!
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Fantastic!!!!
With just a few words you make the reader believe that is what's happening to the girl in the pic.!
loved it!!!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
darlintlc
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