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You looked into my eyes and promised,
you said i don't lie,
Yet you did.
You recited a poem,
SO WHAT!
You said thats you,
SO WHAT!
Your lies are not what bug me,
Your slut is my problem.
She gets in my face,
Throughs her words,
she thinks shes queen,
She wrong.
SO WHAT we stayed friends,
SO WHAT we still talk,
SO WHAT were still close,
SO WHAT!
SO WHAT that is still like you,
SO WHAT that she hates me,
SO WHAT I hate her,
SO WHAT!
It's your choice,
So make it.
So that's your answer,
SO WHAT!
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Comments
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the emotion is this poem is very clear great job

