to evening's wet sand
I scratch your name next to mine
and the moon… cries too
My Senryu Poetry
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu and Pixiku by Samplette.
1000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You are just brilliant. I melt to your words dear friend. Beautiful work. Best luck to you sweets.
Kelli -
Its so short..yet so sweet. I love this power u exude.
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this is a japanese form of poetry...short yes...it speaks of emotions in the present tense...much like Haiku..nature in the present tense...might want to look on google for more poems like this and it's history, I also have a list of poems Ive written in senyru posted above * In a List *
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this tugs at my heart
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A beautifully written senryu. You did a lovely job with this. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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I think the reason you are one of my favorites,
is your abilitiy to pulled up these words
so creatively, the way you bring nature to life
and connect emotions is amazing.
so creative.
God bless
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