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Listen

My child please hear
What I have to say
My name is Jesus
And I wont betray
I’ve watched you crying
As people push you away
Wont you give me a try
I wont lead you astray
I can meet you
Right where you are
I can heal you
Of the emotional scars
Let me be your father
I can raise you right
You’re never a bother
For you I gave my life
Beautiful and precious
Is what you are to me
I’ve been tugging at your heart
Won’t you give me the key?
you’ve tried so many things
To ease the inner pain
But that emptiness you feel
Wont just go away
Let me be your only
Your protector and friend
I wont leave you lonely
My spirit I now send
You cant see me with your eyes
But right now I know you feel
My love surrounding you
My child I’m for real
Where others have lied
I will speak truth
Where others have hurt
I will heal you
Where others have used
I will give
Where others have torn
I will mend
don’t worry about how
Why or when
Just call out to me
I’ll remove all the sin
Just get to know me
my book is more than words
Its my promises to you
There’s life in each verse
So come to my arms
Broken and tired
I will embrace you
And silence the liar
So many words have been spoken
That you believed and it hurt
But I tell you now
They couldn’t see what you’re worth
I speak over you
A purpose and plan
I made you unique
You’re no accident
So let me lead you now
Into a life you’ve never known
I am your creator
Ill never leave you alone

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Im not actually a religious person, at all. far from it. but, it is always good to look from someone else's point of view.

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Comments


  • I-Feel-weightless
    June 19, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful, real, wonderful poem. Every line touched my heart. The rhymes were great, the flow was fantastic!! Probably one of my favorite poems I have read in awhile. Everybody has some one looking after them. Great job!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    lovely

    knock and the door will be open.

    very good rhyme and flow,

    you may not be religious,

    but we are all guided by our souls.

    beautiful write.

    thank you for entering.

    God bless my friend...


  • ucancallmereal
    May 19, 2008

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    this is BEAUTIFUL!! really its awesome..
    every word is so true, and honest
    lovely rhythm too(:
    excellent job!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    THIS IS TRUE

    EVERY WORD

    EXQUISITE!

    GOD BLESS...