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In the Lumber room 1

Cricket pads
grass stained
soft wrinkles grey fuzz
scuffs waggle comical
like ears
smell of Sun days
and blanco
stuffing shifts
the hard places and soft places
move around
bruised by googlies
plick- plock fuck
OWZATT!




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  • Dienush Greeters member
    May 16

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This sounds really good, especially this part:

    "smell of Sun days
    and blanco
    stuffing shifts
    the hard places and soft places"

    Vivid and unlike anything I've read before. Keep writing

    ~Diana