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Blue (haiku)


samurai swords slash
silk waves of shanghai cutter
blue marlin sailfish

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  • jinsays gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    wonderful!

    I believe this is anyway. I love the silk waves of the shanghai cutter
    Long time it's been. I need to do some catching up with your owork my English friend
    Much love,
    jin


  • Cynthia Gaines
    May 20, 2008
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    Brilliant!!!


  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    i will have an s please bob - in blue brevity silence slips sensations to shimmered waves a good fish/ocean smiling stanza.