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Floating Free By Hanging In

Travels modes have changed with age
From speed of snail pace
To raging flash

Some as tin cans
Some as tanks
Matters not for purpose made

Being an emergency worker
Many scenes I've seen
Twisted metal in a heap

Some have walked away unscathed
Some crumbled under the seats
Or worse tossed and crushed beneath the mass

Where does one start
Cries ring out
Save me, help me, or not a sound

Pick and choose
Worst to least
Affect a body or memory

Victims riding
Victims saving
All affected by a strap

Seat belts save
More oft than not
Excuse and price can't buy back life

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  • daviscth silver member
    May 20

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    Thank you so much for posting this in my contest. For me, the last line pulled the whole piece together. I like this a lot.
  • great job here tooo... glad one of us is writting and its not me...... *cries* 's thanks for sharing... love ya...