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Tanker

Time bomb knocking
bursting the bubble
unknown horror within,
scattered minds torn
wake this tank of rage,
inside angry plagues
minds eye a virgin
to blood no more,
birds tweet there taps
as another person falls

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 17, 2008

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    Well, I am not sure who or what you are trying to tease with this, but not exactly what I had in mind. Still good writing, just not here. Thanks for entering. Storm