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Haiku - Childsplay

Swings And Roundabouts 

Dreams wing, wring ring doubts,

whence fate dates coincidence,

sense swings, roundabouts

Expanding Rainbows
 
 

 

 

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pic Swings and Roundabouts Rubyblue50
http://flickr.com/photos/fractalite/2365983461/

Expanding Rainbows Rubyblue50
http://flickr.com/photos/fractalite/475488125/

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  • Perfect-Pain
    August 20
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    Woot!

    Nice picture choice and placement in the middle. You definitely picked a great way to showcase your work. Very nice imagery there... in so few words. Rock on.

  • aanika-xox gold member
    August 11

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    wow,
    your play on words amazes me.
    i had to read this a few times through to fully grasp what you were saying
    but once I did, I loved it.

    also the pictures are awesome

  • BorntothePurple
    July 11

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    Nice play on words. Yes, I admit I had a bit of a hard time following it at first. Then I read it over a few times, and each time I read it, I like it a little bit more I really found this poem cool to read outloud. It's a nice haiku and very clever, I will read more of your stuff in the future!

  • Samplette gold member
    May 16

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    A bit of a tongue twister here. Well crafted senryu? Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam
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