Some rocks and clouds
A tree
Some sky
Still a tree
More rocks
A bit of ground
Maybe a gecko or something
The tree is still there
Probably be still there after we kill the world!
A contest entry
- QUICKIE (Good for the soul) lol by Confuzzled1.
450 points, ended May 16, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites by Dragonbabyx3.
800 points, ended July 6, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This... Is interesting to say the least. I hate the thought of us killing the earth, but I also know, that eventually it will happen. Which tends to be quite a scary thought... Who knows what will survive! Thankyou for entering my contest, and good luck!
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those damn geckos are everywhere it seems, not just in my house. I wondered what that noice was.
great piece
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l.o.l the only things that would survive are gecko's & cockroaches...
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lol I sure hope the gecko lives, they breed like mice LOL be needed to procreate...after all we will all be cold-blooded soon
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I am new to this site and have tried to be respectful and kind to other poets here, your comments make me think I am wrong to be nice. You seem to get joy from putting other people down in their writing.
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Don't be nice, be honest! Otherwise you are a lier.
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When you offer such poetry as this to the general public I find it odd that you would say boring to my poetry. But that is all well and good with your opinion. - now, get ready for my opinion on your offering of poetry. I find it lacking in dimension, it is too simple in my estimation, it is like reading a shopping list. I could read the back of my cornflake packet and find more inspiration there. What you present here is not poetry at all, it is just a cold calculation, a parody of poetry, you try, I will give you that, but fail miserably with your attempt at it. How someone generously gifted you a gold trophy to slide the ego up a notch is beyond me.
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"When you offer such poetry as this ...."
You call what I wrote here a poem?
It was a one line winner. -
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A one line winner that has, let me count on my fingers... (note the correct use of the ellipses) 9 lines!
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Wow simple and powerful. Do you think we are definitly going to destroy the whole planet by globel warming or is it just a maybe? and is your poem a kind of warning?
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hahaha made me laugh a lil ty and ya truthful to on the last line. NICE!
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this was dcope nice here seriously i think you did a very great job penning this for the contest i happen to like nature so that is a plus for me good luck to you artist for a great pen
d finest
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