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HW...Disappointed

I

cry

no more

you

have deceived

 

 

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Rheea gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    i was getting upset for you until i read contest entry... those contest ... =)


  • Blooming Poet
    May 16, 2008
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    Too relatable. Sounds like what i am going through


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 16, 2008
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    Excellent choice of 7 words--Well done and Best of luck in the contest!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Pages and pages
    of words
    condensed
    to seven.

    Emotion well contained,
    well expressed.

    Aesthete