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the flashed back love



“Sea Escape” or "Disney Magic"
Midnight dreams are tender-sweet
Loneliness spreads from horizon
Through the windows of my suite.
Pain in heart does lose its edges,
While it reminds my love and joy,
You and me, beyond in childhood,
I’m your girl, and you’re my boy.

Years have passed, like waves across the ocean,
Having hidden deep, the hopes and love.
The tear has dropped burning me the finger,
By the salt you are frightened of…

Beg for “Magic”, do the favor
Animate the love, for me
Let us come aboard together
Beg you, charge me any fee
Berth in Nassau, embarkation,
I am watching, from above,
Boy and girl are marching smiling,
Hand in hand – the flashed back love

Years have passed, like waves across the ocean,
Having hidden deep, the hopes and love.
The tear has dropped burning me the finger,
Yes, the salt gives me its blessing now…

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  • wow

    wow this is really good i love th line. . .boy and girl are marching smiling, hand in hand- the flashed back love
  • Dienush Greeters member
    May 16

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Wow, nice lyrics. I especially liked the first chorus, it's so creative. Well, the whole piece is, but the first chorus has.. something. Love how you connected the sea waves with years passing and tears and salt, very clever.

    ~Diana

    • Hard4Graft
      May 17
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      Thank you!

      Thank you, Diana, that's the most important for young poet to meet with approval. Very clever? is sounding like something artificial, any way, that's the story from my life, partly real, partly the illusion.