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Beatitude

 

Indebted sevenfold
I would gladly be

for that hypothetical

thinness of rapture.

 

Honesty never

tasted better.

 

 

Author notes

12-17 words
Prompt:
Happiness: We rarely feel it.
I would buy it, beg it, steal it,
Pay in coins of dripping blood
For this one transcendent good
~Amy Lowell

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  • poetryality silver member
    June 12, 2008

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    Gold well deserved for this one Sis'!

    The brevity of this work speaks volumes. Concise and true all wrapped up into an intellectual work of literary genius! Congratulations! Job exceedingly well done! WOW!

    :"hypothetical
    thinness of rapture"


    A wonderfulcombination of words here!



    Always Loving YOU ♥

    Your Sis', Renee


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 9, 2008

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    Yes... this is so true and wondefully stated.

    Well deserved golden beauty.


    Delila


  • Merry Christmas
    May 16, 2008

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    Totally confuzzling to idiots like me but somehow my malfunctioning brain recognises this poems brilliance.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 16, 2008

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    Oh yeaah I think this is the winner
    Great tale


    Cindy


  • Angelflower
    May 16, 2008

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    *closes mouth with finger* wow.. this was really great!! it's just so amazing!! you did a wonderful job with the prompt!! great write! Best of luck..

    Angel


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Best I have rad yet!

    well done you!

    Simon


  • SuicidalLover
    May 16, 2008

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    Oh this is deeply profound. I thank you for your comment and I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Wow.. this is brilliant!! I love it...!


  • Tattboyspet
    May 16, 2008

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    DAMN girl!!!!! You're good!!!!!!!
    filled with sadness here and a touch of darkness too
    LOVELY!!!!!

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