Indebted sevenfold
I would gladly be
for that hypothetical
thinness of rapture.
Honesty never
tasted better.
Author notes
12-17 words
Prompt:
Happiness: We rarely feel it.
I would buy it, beg it, steal it,
Pay in coins of dripping blood
For this one transcendent good
~Amy Lowell
A contest entry
- Quickie!!!! by Angelflower.
753 points, ended May 16, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Gold well deserved for this one Sis'!
The brevity of this work speaks volumes. Concise and true all wrapped up into an intellectual work of literary genius! Congratulations! Job exceedingly well done! WOW!
:"hypothetical
thinness of rapture"
A wonderfulcombination of words here!
Always Loving YOU ♥
Your Sis', Renee
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Yes... this is so true and wondefully stated.
Well deserved golden beauty.
Delila
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Totally confuzzling to idiots like me but somehow my malfunctioning brain recognises this poems brilliance.
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Oh yeaah I think this is the winner
Great tale
Cindy
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*closes mouth with finger* wow.. this was really great!! it's just so amazing!! you did a wonderful job with the prompt!! great write! Best of luck..
Angel
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Best I have rad yet!
well done you!
Simon
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Oh this is deeply profound. I thank you for your comment and I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Wow.. this is brilliant!! I love it...!
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DAMN girl!!!!! You're good!!!!!!!
filled with sadness here and a touch of darkness too
LOVELY!!!!!
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