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The fog of love

The most sincere of love
People once thought unworthy of

This girl, this guy,
They both defy,
A world of pain;
Marijuana, and of course, [[pretty.little.co-caine]]

Full of fear,
Baby it's our world premiere

So many pills,
Pink, purple, blue, and green
Watching, as it slowly kills
Hush baby, "don't make a scene"

Trying to stay strong,
No sense of right and wrong
A haze, a fog
Vision engulfed in smog

Tears are streaming,
His heart is screaming
It's almost euphoric,
Because I feel perfec[t]

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[[Shooting.Starz]]

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  • xrated-candy
    May 30, 2008

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    A world of pain;
    Marijuana, and of course, [[pretty.little.co-caine]]

    loved these lines and way to go with that trophy!


  • endless-lover silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    haha your silly babe i just resd this poem but its in my conetest in this one and well it rocks even the 3ed time of reading it lol i ly!