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Voltaire and a Bottle of Wine

Voltaire and a bottle of wine,
Candle on and electricity out,
A time for thought…
                    “Go cultivate your own fucking garden!”
The book pages flutter
The cover lies discarded as the room echoes
Laughter bouncing
Tired eyes gleaming,
Friends.

I thought I saw you.
Walking on the other side of the road,
Long tarmac pavement
Absorbing those strides
And I tripped –

Flat on my face in the pond,
Textbook soaked and cloak tangled,
You help me up…
                “You looked like a gigantic frog.”
Tender words are lost
on you. My strange but ever-loyal friend,
I cry through laughter,
Grazes stinging,
Smiles.

I think I see you.
Standing on the other side of the room,
Smiling me memories
Showing everything but that
Fateful day.

But you are not there
Because you are dead. 

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  • staticgrace
    May 16, 2008
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    Oh I particularly like the way you used the lists of ajectives in a collection of pictures, and then summed it up with a simple word like 'friends'; I thought the introduction in the unconscious blur of what friendship is, s something you captured very well.


  • staticgrace
    May 16, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I'm actually feeling rather weepy.

    What beautiful writing, your word compositions never fail to astound me.

    He was blessed to have a friend in you.