[Verse 1] Close your eyes and listen close
Hear our hearts beat as one
No words can express how I feel right now
Lying safe and warm in your arms
[Bridge 1] There's no pain anymore
All my worry is gone
All that's left inside me
Is the strength of your love
[Chorus] Taste my tears
Feel my breath
Giving life unto the air
No more will I look around me
For that missing piece that's you
[Verse 2]My heart is full
My soul is complete
The emptiness is gone again
Love has finally shown me
Who will guide me the long way home
[Bridge 2] Never fear my love
It's now plain to see
You were what I needed all along
[Chorus (repeat 2x)] Taste my tears
Feel my breath
Giving life unto the air
No more will I look around me
For that missing piece that's you
[Verse 3] As I lay here in your arms
I know my world is right again
Close your eyes and listen close
Hear our hearts beat as one
[Chorus] Taste my tears
Feel my breath
Giving life unto the air
No more will I look around me
For that missing piece that's you
(repeat to fade)
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this is amazing
i know how you feel, like you finally found the missing piece of your heart, it flows really nicely and i think it would sound really good with music behind it
such a sweet emotional poem <3 -
wow
wow i love this song.. its good! i cant put words to explain how good it is! wow..thats all i can say!
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wow i cant even tell you how great that is i dont think there is a word to discribe how great this poem is wow its incredibledont let anyone ever discurage you you have a real talent and hope to see it set to music and on the radio
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Wow! This is incredible! I loved the flow and the message! A beautiful piece indeed!
Kyle
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I Love This :O
I can hear music with this! This is exceptionally well done. I love how you labeled each part, that helps give the reader an idea of how the song should sound. This is really well formed and when I sang it (yes I sang it) to myself, it sounded wonderful. I really would love to hear what kind of music you would set this piece to. Well done, Keep that Muse alive!!
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