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to pieces[♥]

If my heart could tear
it would be ripped
        to pieces
at sight of you.

tears begin to fall,
my heart begins to pace
I want to kiss you.
        everywhere.
just let me touch your face

push me, pull me
  further in
love me, hate me
  you'll never win

breaking, taking
  my heart away
I've given it all
  to you today.

hit it.

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  • IT Refugee
    May 17, 2008

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    I love the raw, naked quality of the emotions in your stuff. You convey a visceral passion that drags the reader into a world of romance and dreams.
    In other words: You rock!