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used

See me
The broken toy
Only memories

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ummm... im not used to doing anything so short, but i thought I'd give it a try... so... yeah...

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  • james119
    June 15, 2008

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    you've encapsulated quite a bit in these few words.

    If you are still dissatisfied with this, revisit it later with a fresh mind. I like where it's going

    james


  • Blooming Poet
    May 16, 2008
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    nice first short one.