thunderstorm sheds weight
onto brown parched meadowland
wildflowers return
A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu and Pixiku by Samplette.
1000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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love it now!!!
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These seems to read like three different statements. Though it is good, it could be better. Good luck to you.
Kelli -
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OH!! I see what you mean.
Thank you... I fixed my haiku and it is better in my eyes. 
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Beautiful lovely in may ways
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Oh, what beauty a thundering rain storm brings to our hearts and eyes.
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a good poem, ah yes, the flowers live, fresh new petals as rivers of rain find the earth waiting for the kiss of freedom.
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Very well creafted haiku. Not sure about that capital letter in the first line. I could be wrong, but I've been taught all lower or all upper. But I will leave that to you poet. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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