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Earthquake

earthquake gains notice
all forms recognize the voice
screams rip through the air

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 19, 2008

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    They sure are happening a lot these days. A very serious subject to write about that's for sure. Well written.
    Kelli


  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    a good poem, i read that as gives notice at first, i have just woke up though lol i was thinking of it was giving up its job and then the screams


  • Samplette gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Another unique haiku for me. Well written and though a sad topic a good one. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam