Chunks,
dissolved in vats,
reducing lunar glow
along side,
bovine secretions,
residue,
frolicking,
like beard
calcium,
cookies
rewarding...
good deeds?
Author notes
Prompt: "Medicated Realities" - (20 words)
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... why not!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 16, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is straight gold but i wasnt the judge i liked this you did straight with this congrads on your cup
d finest -
Damn! Now I want a cookie..
A thoughtful take on the prompt here. Best wishes in the contest!
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I was just going to get some cookies to eat! Oreos!!! lol..This just made me hunger for them more!! lol.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt.
Angel
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I love how your mind works ... amazing imagery and message! Bravo!
Steve
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Ohh now this is fascinating! To me it speaks of what is injected into our foods these days and what that can do to us.. I have a theory on that!!
OK.. that might not be what you were meaning lol.. but it's how I saw it!
Excellent!
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You made me hungry just reading the poem! Nice job on this quickie! Interesting read too!
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