Narcotized visions
secludes fragmented doses.
Embedded dreams
carry opiate delusions.
Awakening fearfully
to lost worlds illusions.
Psychedelic phantoms,
whisking hauntingly...
Author notes
~prompt~"Medicated Realities"
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... why not!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 16, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Very powerful emotion coursing within. An eerily penned piece to go along well with the prompt! Nice write!
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ahh ... the haunting effects of poppy seeds.
j/k. Nice imagery and description of effect some of these meds are capable of.
Steve
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I recently have hallucinations that were exactly like this!!! No good going cold turkey off some meds lol..
Intense and powerful!
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