Breathe adrenaline's toxicity ...
Delusional breath teetered
as memory recalled
velvet rope dedications-
front row gratification as
headlights spotlight the audience.
Author notes
Prompt goes here: "Medicated Realities" - Poppa (thanks Rob!)
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... why not!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 16, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you did great congrads on the cup
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Great visuals here.. A powerfully penned piece; straight forward - but with a heightened sense of articulation and depth. Excellent!
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oh you're doing alot with the 20 words! lovely take on the prompt
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Cool! Like where you took this... very unique!!
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